Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/United States Navy enlisted rates

United States Navy enlisted rate insignia edit

I have been working on this article for a long time now, I have completely revamped it including the creation of all new images. I would like to put it up for featured but there has been some discussion between myself and a few others as to whether this is a list or an article. So, on top of requesting a peer review I would also like to get a general consensus as to which category this falls into. — WilsBadKarma (Talk) 04:47, 28 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin edit

Very nice. A few comments, in no particular order:

  • I would say that this is more a list than an article. The volume of prose is fairly low, compared to the tables; it seems cleaner to consider this to be a well-annotated list than a scrawny and list-heavy article. ;-)
  • Can we eliminate the "See also" section? It seems quite strangely placed; I'd do the following:
    • Place the horizontal template at the very bottom of the article.
    • Place the portal link at the top of the "References" section.
    • Remove the two plain links; they're both already linked in the text.

I think this should be ready for FLC in short order; keep up the great work! Kirill Lokshin 01:55, 30 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I have made the changes you suggested and thanks, I am going to leave up both peer reviews until tomorrow and if there are no further issues I'm going to put it up for FLC. — WilsBadKarma (Talk) 04:39, 30 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]