Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Treaty of Versailles

Treaty of Versailles edit

I think this article is very important and the article itself is well written in my opinion. I helped a little bit in some sections and thought it could use a peer review. Cheif Captain 19:07, 7 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin edit

Not a bad start, but still lots of work needed:

Citations are needed throughout.
The bulleted lists should generally be converted to prose. As it stands, the article's overall flow is quite choppy.
The mammoth "See also" section should be eliminated. Ideally, creating a navigation template for the treaties which ended WWI would remove the need for most of these links.
"Alternative viewpoints" needs to be integrated into "Historical assessments", and both sections ought to be expanded. The question of whether the treaty was a good one has been the topic of extensive historiography, which can be discussed in rather more detail than is present here.

Kirill Lokshin 22:03, 7 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]