Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Changban

Battle of Changban edit

I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to know if this article has any possibility of being a GA or maybe a FA, and recommendations. Thanks, Armando.O^{talk • Ev} 01:02, 6 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Kirill Lokshin edit

Everything has a possibility of making FA (eventually); but there's still quite a bit of work to be done here before you're really ready for that:

Citations! An article that's not thoroughly cited stands no chance at all of passing FAC, or even GAN. I'd suggest focusing on this as your top priority.
The repetition of names in the "Combatants" and "Commanders" fields in the infobox is somewhat clunky; I'd suggest, at the least, changing the combatants to be "Forces of Cao Cao" and "Forces of Liu Bei".
The lead should be quite a bit longer.
After the major issues are resolved, some thorough copyediting will likely be needed; there are some pretty rough spots in the prose.

Hope that helps! Kirill 04:37, 10 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]