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17th Airborne Division

I have been working on this article for the past two weeks or so, and I believe I have it at a stage where it can be peer-reviewed and possibly graded for B-Class status. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Skinny87 (talk) 22:17, 11 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

A few things that could be improved:

The lead ought to be lengthened to two/three full paragraphs. Done
There's no need for an "Activation" sub-section when there's nothing else in the "Formation" section. Done Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think the pulled-out "See also" links add anything. Using {{details}} there might be defensible, but those articles aren't really see-also ones. Done Thanks for that, I just thought they looked snazzy, but I'm still learning! Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Disactivation"? Not "Deactivation"? Done Teach me to edit last thing at night :) Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Dates should be linked as Month Day or Month Day Year, not as Month Day Year. Done Skinny87 (talk) 08:27, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, though, quite a nice article. Kirill ^(prof) 02:31, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Buckshot06

Quick note: where is Camp Myles Standish? Buckshot06 (talk) 03:51, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have no idea! Let me look around for the location and I'll add it in! Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Found it! It's in (or was) Taunton, Massachusetts. Added to the article

Done Skinny87 (talk) 15:59, 12 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]