Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Heinrich Bär

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Promoted Nick-D (talk) 11:49, 3 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Heinrich Bär edit

After a thorough GA review I feel that the article is also of A-class quality. MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:56, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support - I reviewed this article for GA, and see no reason why it does not meet the A-Class criteria. It is well detailed and sourced. Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 07:02, 21 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Amazingly, I wasn't able to find any major problems. Excellent work. – Joe Nu tter 03:13, 22 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, excellent work, couldn't find any major issues, meets all A-Class criteria as far as I can see. Well done, Regards. Woody (talk) 16:11, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support. I went in and deleted some extraneous commas and copyedited here and there. I am curious as to whether anyone else thinks it necessary to copy a supporting reference up into the lead where it says "During the remaining course of World War II, Bär would be credited with a further 130 aerial victories including 16 whilst flying one of the first jet fighters, the Me 262, an achievement which is believed should have earned him the coveted Ritterkreuz mit Eichenlaub, Schwertern und Brillianten (Knight's Cross with Oak Leaves, Swords and Diamonds). However, Hermann Göring's personal dislike of Bär coupled with Bär's insubordinate character and lack of military discipline denied him this award." I think it would be a good idea to put a reference after the sentence that says "which is believed" and after the sentence containing "Hermann Göring's personal dislike of Bär". Binksternet (talk) 19:37, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done I referenced the lead. MisterBee1966 (talk) 07:31, 1 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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