Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Requests/The Future of Air Transport white paper

• This article recently failed a FAC nom, though the only constructive comment it received was a need for cleaning up. I can't see where the problem is myself, and I'm hoping some fresh eyes will be able to spot the deficiencies. Note that someone else has nominated the article for GA, but there is no feedback as yet to suggest that a copyedit is required in order to succeed at this. My motive is to get the article ready for one last stab at FAC. I would appreciate any feedback. --FactotEm (talk) 10:20, 17 February 2008 (UTC)