As noted in the FAC review page for the article, the only remaining concern for boosting this article to FA status is cutting down on excessive wording in sentences and trimming the article just a bit. Pericles of AthensTalk 07:44, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I copyedited the lead and a paragraph or so into the body (tightening language). However, I realized in the middle of this that the article had already undergone a thorough and extensive copyedit. Moreover, this article very recently passed FA approval while I was in the middle of copyediting. Therefore, I am moving it to proofreading. --Malachirality (talk) 07:49, 24 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
