I want the history section the article to be copyedited becasue it was recently added, but i would be good if the whole article could be thoroughly copyedited.Thanks.Sunderland06 11:03, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I have raised a huge number of concerns on the talk page, which I hope the article editors will follow. Happy‑melon 10:30, 20 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]