In the featured article candidacy a reviewer said "This article needs some serious copyediting". I have looked at it myself, but I'm definitely not a great copyeditor so I think it needs someone external, a fresh pair of eyes. Thanks, James086Talk | Email 04:09, 7 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I've started on it. My available time for Wikipedia ebbs and flows, though, so assistance is always welcome. :) — TKD::Talk 05:43, 7 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Done. — TKD::Talk 13:13, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
