Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/Johny Mera Naam

Johny Mera Naam edit

I would like to know how to improve on this article, and also need help on where to place the references. I expanded the article by adding the sypnosis, cast and soundtrack, and also added some references.Fireblazex3 (talk) 06:26, 31 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments of Bill william compton:

Lead

As it's a Hindi film then add its Hindi name also, using ({{lang-hi|''name of film in Hindi''}}) template.
Also add meaning of its title in English using same template (just replace hi with en).
"is a 1970 Indian Hindi movie", don't start like this; start the lead like is a 1970 Indian thriller/horror/comedy/drama/romantic/etc film.
"Directed by Vijay Anand", merge it with previously mentioned sentence.
Mention name of producer after director, like produced by.
"Film poster", in spite of it I would prefer theatrical release poster.
We generally don't use "movie" in articles, replace with film.

Sypnosis

Due to the copyright violation I've blanked the section. As you seem to be unaware of such policy, I'm not giving you formal warning. Write whole summary by yourself, in your language which shouldn't match with IMDB.

Cast

Don't use those "...", replace with as, like Hema Malini as Rekha.

Soundtrack

Replace "song" with Title.
It would be better if you mention the length of each song, under the same heading.
Remove parenthesis around s ("(s)").

External links

External links section come after References.

References

Except boxofficeindia.com no other source is reliable enough to use as reference.
Cite the sources.

Infobox

Wikilink the Trimurti Films, remove pvt. ltd, etc as we never write them within article.
Wikilink the Prasad Studios.
Add "Budget" and "Box office" etc attributes.

I hope this would be enough for a stub class article. — Bill william compton^Talk 11:15, 31 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]