Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Assessment/American Graffiti

American Graffiti edit

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Failed Girolamo Savonarola (talk) 19:28, 12 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nominator: Wildroot (talk) 23:49, 13 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this article for A-Class review because after doing both a comprehensive and exhaustive rewrite, this article has greatly improved in the span of a couple of weeks. Suggestions would be great. ~~Also, I intend to replace the IMDb citation from the Awards section.~~ I also plan on finish writing the Cast descriptions, even if they aren't required (see 300 (film)#Cast). Wildroot (talk) 23:49, 13 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The Intro is too long, really pushing hard against the four paragraph limit with really big paragraphs, instead of being a nice comfortable two or three paragraphs. Also it would be good to include some of cast information inline in the plot summary because formatting it as Character Name ([Actor Name]) make it much easier to follow what is happening. None of that would probably stop this from getting A Class but I hope you'll consider making the extra effort to make the article the best it can be. (I'll try and come back and take a look at cleaning it up myself.) -- Horkana (talk) 05:48, 2 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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