Wikipedia:WikiProject Birds/Peer review/Eurasian Sparrowhawk

Eurasian Sparrowhawk

I've added quite a lot of extra text and would appreciate some suggestions for amendments/further improvements. Thanks! Bogbumper (talk) 13:49, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • It looks quite good overall. I added a bit on their identification in the context of South Asia but confusables in other regions may need to be examined. A search on http://www.google.com/webhp?complete=0&hl=en#q=Accipiter+nisus+site:www.archive.org may yield some historic content or images. Several interesting papers on Google Scholar search that have interesting results that could be woven into the article. Some folks on WT:BIRD can help obtain papers in case you do not have access to them. Shyamal (talk) 16:39, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks - I'll take a look. Bogbumper (talk) 18:05, 26 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]