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April 16 edit
Changed a lot and now need quick review for further improvements.Arghya Roy (talk) 02:57, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
- This needs some serious work for spelling, grammar and, most importantly, tone. It sounds like an advertisement ("great adventure", "all credits goes to its management team") and arguably misrepresents its sources instead of summarizing them. Huon (talk) 03:40, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks Arghya Roy (talk) 13:32, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
Question: i don't understand why my citations are not relevant. am i formatting them correctly?
Irecortes (talk) 04:32, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
- [Draft removed.]
- The sources are formatted correctly. The "submission declined" message is still the old one that should be kept as a historical record until the draft is accepted; the draft has not been submitted for another review yet. However, there are still major parts of the draft that cite no sources whatsoever, for example the claim that Guttman was "the youngest violinist ever to be admitted to the Royal Conservatory of Brussels", and conversley several of your sources don't have much to say about Guttman. Huon (talk) 07:48, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
I would like to add two figures to my contribution. Can you tell me how I shold do this please? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dr John D A Piper (talk • contribs) 10:21, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
- Your only contribution is to this help desk, and the article does not appear to have been speedy deleted. I don't know what article you are referring to. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 10:41, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
unable to type fully qualified domain name in system properties edit
Am using Windows 7 and i unable to add to the domain controller which we have.am unable to type the domain name in the system proprties while going to change the domain. The letters are typed as capital as anyway if am not on caps lock button. kindly help me to resolve the same. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 115.69.80.50 (talk) 12:45, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
- This page is for questions about submissions via Articles for Creation. Please try the reference desk, though from memory Windows / SMB domain names are always capitalised, so you should never expect them to appear in lower case. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 12:52, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
What is this living all. Don't listen to the outside.--93.96.75.103 (talk) 16:13, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
whate is main frame and its uses? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.233.195.2 (talk) 23:40, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
- Its principle use is holding up the roof of the tent. If dismantled, its components can be used as improvised weapons in either mock or real fighting, or for impalement. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 18:32, 18 April 2013 (UTC)