Wikipedia:Picture peer review/Arches National Park Map

Arches National Park Map edit

Map of Arches National Park.

Many hours of work have been put into this map. This map shows predominant features such as arches, peaks, rivers and streams, mines, and roads. I hope to do more maps of Utah Parks in the near future. I am looking for constructive feedback to perhaps get this (and future) to a FPC quality image. Thanks.

Nominated by: Justinmorris (talk) 22:33, 2 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Very nice map. Normally reviewers would look for maps in vector form, but considering the fact that you have shaded relief and the map is large, a raster map would probably be acceptable. A few other ideas: The font in places is a little dark, as you have black text on a dark map. I might suggest lightening the shaded relief or choosing a different color for the labels. You may also want to choose a different font for the top label "Arches National Park", perhaps something a little less informal. Otherwise, very nice work. Jeff Dahl (Talk • contribs) 18:44, 3 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I made some changes, mainly the ones suggested by Jeff Dahl (which were shared by me too). Much better looking, IMHO. Let me know of any other comments. Justinmorris (talk) 03:00, 5 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Much better. But I notice that the inner region is now darker than the outer region, which is counter-intuitive. Consider making the inner region the lighter one. Also, there seem to be some spiky lines along the border line, especially north of Glover Canyon. Otherwise I think it's ready for FAC. Jeff Dahl (Talk • contribs) 04:20, 5 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Well, the effect I am going for is the one I did on another map. If I took out the coloring on the hillshade outside the park it might help. LOL @ those spikes. Those are totally a freak-out of ArcCrap/Arcmap. I'll figure out how to fix it. Justinmorris (talk) 05:36, 5 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Made some changes. Justin Morris ^{(talk, contributions)} 02:06, 6 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I submitted this to FPC. Justin Morris ^{(talk, contributions)} 04:11, 6 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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