Wikipedia:Peer review/Zahia Rahmani/archive1

I want a peer review because I've been working on biographies of women, but was way out of my league on this one to write about art curation, and many of the sources are in French. If someone who knows about art curation could take a look at this that would be awesome.

Thanks, Zaynab1418 (talk) 04:04, 2 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Zaynab1418: Just checked the article and I did minor fixes. Infobox is missing. "www.inha.fr" and "www.bookforum.com" are not names of websites (it's just taken from url address which is incorrect). For example "facebook.com" website is called "Facebook". There are categories such as "Berber Algerians", "Berber writers" but from the article we know she is just "Berber heritage" so she is not Berber. From the lead we know she is "French-Algerian" but there is no category for Algerian novelists etc. Every sentence in section "Art curation" starts with "Rahmani" - it is possible to add some other variations? Would you review Basshunter in return? Eurohunter (talk) 18:21, 2 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]