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I've listed this article for peer review because it was just listed as a GA and I would like to improve on it further, eventually being able to nominate it for FA status. Any help and suggestions would be very helpful to me! Thanks, (CA)Giacobbe (talk) 20:59, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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For a fair use image with the single cover, 1000 x 1000 or so is pretty big, are you sure that's okay?
"after it was stolen and leaked. After the song " vaguely repetitive "after ... after..."
"Described as a "rap ballad", " by whom?
"numbers 14 and four" comparable numbers should either be all text or all numbers.
"recording artist Annie Lennox (pictured)." actually, I think that's the Eurythmics pictured, so I guess you need to point the reader to Lennox who is on the right of the image.
"After being mixed differently and some lyrics rewritten" reads awkwardly to me. Suggest a copyedit.
"with Hot 93.7 radio" context, where is this radio station?
"also did a remix" never keen on "did" something.
Maybe "also did a remix to the " should be "also remixed the"?
Lil' Kim has a '.
"IThe song peaked " typo.
"Minaj was interviewed ..." -> "She was..."
"Onika Maraj Warren "Oak" Felder," comma missing.
Also worth explaining throughout that Nicki is Onika.
Ref 1, double period, double hyphen. Remove one period, turn double hyphen into en-dash.
Ref 9, avoid # for No.
Ref 19, no accessdate.
Ref 20, lots of info missing.
Check for spaced hyphens, replace with en-dash per WP:DASH.

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:38, 2 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]