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World of Warcraft edit

Hello editors! World of Warcraft is one of the most popular MMORPGs in the world yet it is only a GA quality. A FA quality article would help increase knowledge of such games and would be the first MMORPG to become featured on Wikipedia. While the article is pretty good, some parts could use improvement. Therefore I am looking for someone to critique the article and provide advice on where improvements should be made to the article to help get it to FA quality. Thanks to anyone who helps :) --Hdt83 ^Chat 07:20, 12 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Previous PR

Integrate popular culture sections into the rest of the article. Some of the changes I suggested from the previous PR weren't implemented, so you might want to make some of those, if you wish. Sebi _[talk] 08:30, 12 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I've integrated the separate sections in to one. How does it look now? --Hdt83 ^Chat 02:10, 13 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Er, not quite, but thanks for trying. What I meant for the popular culture sections was to integrate the whole of the section into relevant parts of the article, and then remove the section. "Popular culture" is a codeword for "trivia", and these items should be placed in relevant areas or be removed. That spot at the bottom of the article shouldn't become a dump for info that can't fit anywhere else. Sebi _[talk] 05:42, 13 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
After messing around a bit, I've managed to move most of the pop-culture in to the article as the last paragraph in the lead section. Hopefully that looks better. --Hdt83 ^Chat 06:08, 13 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 00:21, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]