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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to present this to a group of Psychology peers and faculty and this is a major part of my grade for my Industrial and Organizational Psychology class. This is my first Wikipedia Artle and I want to make sure it is adequate.

Thanks, Jastha08 (talk) 22:09, 26 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Smallman12q

It needs more wikilinks wp:wikify. (These are the blue links you see)
It needs additional citations. Every paragraph should have a reference.
The tone is off in certain areas. For example, in "Self-Regulation Theory", it reads: "Another theory based in self-efficacy", "another" is not needed. An article is not like an essay, you don't need to introduce each section with "another theory".
The capitalization is off in some areas, for example with "Work Engagement"
It needs some copyediting
There really should be a section related to the effect of monetary compensation on work motivation.

Overall, its pretty good for a first article.Smallman12q (talk) 23:39, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]