Wikipedia:Peer review/Wolfgang Larrazábal/archive1

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would welcome general feedback on areas for improvement, etc.

Thanks, McPhail (talk) 16:40, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments after a quick skim:

The lede is quite short. I would expand it to include more major events in this person's life.
Split the biography with level 3 headings to help with readability
Is there any information about their legacy? How they influenced something in their communities, or in history?
Is anything named in memory of them? Roads, schools, and buildings are commonly done of this.
Any depictions or artwork of this person? Statues, paintings, etc.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:32, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: - many thanks, I will take a look at these points. McPhail (talk) 08:08, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]