Wikipedia:Peer review/Wolfgang Larrazábal/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I would welcome general feedback on areas for improvement, etc.

Thanks, McPhail (talk) 16:40, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • The lede is quite short. I would expand it to include more major events in this person's life.
  • Split the biography with level 3 headings to help with readability
  • Is there any information about their legacy? How they influenced something in their communities, or in history?
  • Is anything named in memory of them? Roads, schools, and buildings are commonly done of this.
  • Any depictions or artwork of this person? Statues, paintings, etc.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:32, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: - many thanks, I will take a look at these points. McPhail (talk) 08:08, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]