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I've listed this article for peer review. Needs an assessment since it was recently created.
Thanks, Ominae (talk) 01:14, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- I mainly checked the first half of the article. Grammar is a pet peeve of mine, and something I am often bad at myself, so I looked at that.
- I made some edits to Characters; see if they still agree with the general ideas. I might've missed other problems there.
- I also wonder if there's a different way to say "[un]like his[or her] video game counterpart" in that section. I tried removing "video" in second and later occurences so that it would look a bit less repetitive, but I doubt that's the best solution.
- I de-capitalized words like "Flying squirrel" and "Racing queen". If they are proper nouns or something, they are easily changed back.
- I italicized some titles.
- I wonder if Plot can be expanded a bit.
- Peer review is not something I do often (my first, actually), so I hope my changes help you.
- —an odd name 03:13, 23 February 2008 (UTC)