Wikipedia:Peer review/University of Wisconsin-Madison/archive1

University of Wisconsin-Madison edit

I want this article to be featured, and it need clean-up work. Lead may need to be longer, maybe more cites, external links definitely needs to be cleaned up and shortened. Any other comments or ideas will be appreciated! Lordmontu 04:46, 24 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Just a few suggestions:

The intro needs to be expanded a bit. See WP:LEAD.
A lot of claims in the article are not cited. Also, many of the things that are sourced are done in different styles. One uniform style should be used throughout the article. See WP:CITE.
The external links section needs to be tidied, as it is too large.
Some sections, such as the one on the Music Hall, need to be expanded.

-- Underneath-it-All 20:05, 25 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]