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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm interested in taking this to WP:FAC, but I'm interested in some pointers before the FAC, and some input wrt WP:WIAFA cr. 1b.

Thanks, Maxim_(talk) 14:46, 16 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

At a glance, I've got a few thoughts, but I'll go through it more later:

The pre- and post-NHL career and legacy sections seem rather short. I would specifically work on post-NHL career. After all, Thompson was alive for another 40 years, there must have been something that can be said for that.

It's been really difficult to source it; hockey players who retired in the 40s weren't really covered that much later in the media.--Maxim_(talk) 14:05, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There's no source for Thompson having the second most shutouts, and as a single sentence paragraph, looks bad. Perhaps add it into legacy or something along the lines of that?

Removed.--Maxim_(talk) 14:05, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A heavy reliance on so few of references. It won't pass FA with references consisting mainly of two pages of a book, heavy reference to the HHOF statistics page, and extensive use of hockey-reference.com. There is more out there about Thompson, and I imagine most of what is sourced here can be found there.

I'll try to expand the sourcing, although I've been pretty busy recently, so it's not there yet.--Maxim_(talk) 14:05, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Are you sure that he was paid in US$ by the Red Wings? The early NHL tended to use C$, though this may be hard to prove, and porbably not to relevent.

Fixed.--Maxim_(talk) 14:05, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'll try and go through again in more detail in the next while. Kaiser matias (talk) 08:19, 25 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Just curious to why the Career statistic section is missing? A good read, but I don't like the current format of the heading. —Krm500 ^{(Communicate!)} 05:08, 26 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Added the stats, but I don't get your second point.--Maxim_(talk) 14:05, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]