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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this to GA as it would be my first GA and I want to eventually try and get some Legends of Tomorrow episodes to GA. I was originally going to do this with Doctor Who (series 13) but I feel this one is a better option for a peer review as I already have notes on that one from a past GA review (which failed).
I previously opened a peer review for Beebo the God of War but I was told that it wasnt good enough for one, so apologies if this doesnt meet the criteria either, but I feel it does.

Thanks, Questions? four OLIfanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:44, 26 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720 edit

Comments after a quick skim:

The "Continuity" and "Outside references" sections are too much fancruft and should probably be removed from the article.
There are many short sections, which should be expanded upon or merged with others.
The "Critical reception" relies too heavily on quotes. Read WP:RECEPTION for tips on how to improve upon reception sections.
Take a look at Doomsday (Doctor Who) for ideas on what could be added to this article.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:38, 8 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]