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I've listed this article for peer review because I plan to take this to WP:FAC in the near future. Much of its work has been done in the last month or so and having passed WP:GAC, I would like to know what more can be added, if applicable. Thanks, Lemonade51 (talk) 23:04, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Flashbacks"[2])" think I'd move that ref outside the ).
To avoid having back-to-back links, suggest you reword "eighth episode of Friends' fifth season" to "eighth episode of the fifth season of Friends"
Not convinced you need to link "United States".
" got a turkey stuck on his head" not keen on that phrasing.
A minor point, all stories are past tense until " Ross brings Chandler home for ..." any reason?
"It is the fifth Thanksgiving special in the Friends series." ref?
"Doing a flashback meant the ..." again, "doing" is really inelegant writing as far as I'm concerned. Can we rephrase?
"The comic tone of "The One with All the Thanksgivings" was bigger than usual," do "tones" become "bigger"?
Psycho should be Psycho.
Not sure there's a real necessity for small text in the refs.
Is Amazon.com the best ref we can find?

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:26, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]