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The National Conference Center

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to see what areas I should be looking to expand it in or otherwise improve the article. I'm at a loss of where to go next, and since I've created it, it has been rather stale.

Thanks, MBisanz ^talk 16:44, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

• Galleries are discouraged on article pages.  Done
• Expansion ideas:
  • Add information about notable events that have taken place here.
  • Design.
  • The grounds around it.
  • Are there any book sources on the center?
• External links section should come after the references section.  Done
• "It was built by Xerox in 1974 under the name of Xerox Document University (also known as the Xerox Conference Center)[3][2]" I would put inline cite 2 before inline cite 3.  Done

Dabomb87 (talk) 23:21, 6 October 2008 (UTC)