Wikipedia:Peer review/The Century (building)/archive1
The Century (building) edit
This is a major contributing property to the Central Park West Historic District, nominated below. I have worked on it a great deal lately and would appreciate some feedback and perhaps some pointers toward additional sources on its architecture as I try to attain GA and one day FA with this article. I have put in some pretty intense effort around peer review lately and am hoping to see some fruits for my labors. : ) Thanks ahead of time any help is very much appreciated. IvoShandor 15:44, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
- Hello IvoShandor.
- Really needs a picture of the building.
- Jacques Delamarre appears as a red link twice so I think that perhaps a stub should be created.
- Work could be put into improving the prose. Don't forget to read User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a, and then go through your article with a toothcomb to iron out any problems. A sentence such as "Theater demolition pushed forward through early November", which begins a paragraph, could be better worded for example, but I spotted more examples elsewhere.-- Zleitzen(talk) 17:52, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback. I will just respond to your points in a paragraph here, it just easier. I will address the prose as I copy edit, which I haven't yet, feel free to make any easy changes you see, of course. Jacques, I would very much like to create an article for, hence the red link, he's fairly notable as a NYC architect during the time period. Photo requests are in with two separate users who will get to them within the next two weeks, hopefully shooting the majority of properties on List of properties (Central Park West Historic District). Thanks again for taking the time to look over the article, any additional comments would be welcome. IvoShandor 18:07, 27 April 2007 (UTC)