Wikipedia:Peer review/Tamsin Greig/archive1

Tamsin Greig edit

The main areas of concern in this article are the filmography and the number of external links, although all improvements are welcome. ISD 15:20, 16 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

References are needed almost EVERYWHERE.
Remove the fan site external links, keep only IMDb and other reliables.
Non-free picture-->remove ASAP
Remove "Interviews" section etc and turn into referneces.

Dalejenkins 17:44, 16 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Okay lets see.

In the filmography, axe the "Television (herself)" section. It doesn't really add anything. I did te same with David Mitchell and its a GA now.
The references need to be cleaned up, they arn't properly formatted, so I suggest the cite web and cite news formats.
Remove the Green Wing, Black Books, Love Soup and Sally Hope Associates external links, they're to do with the shows and agency themselves, not Greig.

Aside from that its good, the prose could use some expansion, as the page seems a little short. And it could use a free use image, and the scrapping of one of the fair use ones, possibly the Fran Katzenjammer one. But everything is referenced so it probably would pass a GAC. Gran² 14:56, 17 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]