Wikipedia:Peer review/Super Smash Bros. Brawl/archive1

Super Smash Bros. Brawl edit

This peer review discussion has been closed.
A peer review has been requested for this article, as new information regarding the topic in question is being released on a daily basis. However, there is substantial dissent as to what information is truly relevant. Large portions of the article also make reference to short facts about the game that serve to be more trivial in nature than serving any other purpose.

Because the vast majority of edits are being made by fans of the game, I feel it is important for somebody who is not familiar with the game to take an objective review.

Thanks, Ckjy 16:27, 30 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for minor issues of grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR _t 02:51, 1 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I recommend a hearty dose of patience and a conservative approach: The game's not due out for a good three months and nine days (at least here in the US), and some of the article isn't going to be written until then, particularly its reception. Nifboy 17:45, 1 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
There is no explanation on what "Vs. Mode" is and the article is in need of proofreading. What to do when a reference link "goes dead". Although this is more of a issue to look at in the long run, my main concern is all of those references to the Smashbros website. If history does repeat itself yet again, the article will have a ton of dead links within a couple of years. _{« ₣ullMetal ₣alcon »} 19:39, 18 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]