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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know what I could do to improve this article to B-class or higher.

Thanks, Chrisnait (talk | contribs) 18:33, 14 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Chrisnait I read through the artical and here are some things I would like to point out.

The lead could be expanded.
The descriptions for the individual episodes could be expanded.
- Full episodes of this show are not available online, only clips, so the descriptions are just what's said in the TV listings. Chrisnait (talk | contribs) 18:14, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The first ref isn't behind punctuation (not required).
- Fixed. Chrisnait (talk | contribs) 18:15, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

— RealFakeKim T 08:28, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Chrisnait (talk | contribs) 18:13, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]