Wikipedia:Peer review/Slobodan Milošević/archive1

Slobodan Milošević edit

This is a actual topic and the article is of high quality and long. Any proposals on improvement to get FA status? Off! 20:48, 25 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest that early career be renamed early life because not all of it is on career.
Under "Downfall of presidency", there are 4 one-sentence run-on paragraphs that need to be fixed.
There are several external links towards the end that need to be converted to footnotes.

Thanks, AndyZ _t 23:17, 25 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

More pictures would be nice, and more inline citations (50 is more like the expected standard today, not 5).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus ^Talk 04:46, 27 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]