Sleeping Dogs (video game) edit
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get some feedback about issues that need to be resolved. After that, I would like to nominate it for a featured article.
Thanks for you cooperation! URDNEXT (talk) 18:15, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
- Why information of small DLC packs and release information of the bigger ones were removed? Replacing it with pure plot summary isn't an improvement. --Mika1h (talk) 19:14, 7 June 2014 (UTC)
Comments by Cas Liber edit
Random notes...
- Avoid standalone setences - try to incorporate them into paragraphs.
- Make sure everything has a citation.
- Let facts speak for themselves - see [1] - not sure if there are other examples of this
Comments by David Fuchs edit
Forthcoming... Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 17:08, 24 June 2014 (UTC)