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Simpson's paradox edit

I just read this article and thought it was excellent. Other people have commented on its talk page too. I am submitting it for peer review with a view to nominating it to be a featured article. Thanks.--Icon2007 15:56, 27 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

While it's cute for the example to involve Bart and Lisa, their activity should not involve editing Wikipedia as that's a self reference.-gadfium 22:27, 27 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've now read the talk page, and see the matter of self-reference has been discussed. I agree with the anon in Talk:Simpson's_paradox#One_of_the_finer_Wiki_entries that editing Wikipedia is not an activity familiar to most of the readers, so I would still prefer the example to use a different activity.-gadfium 22:35, 27 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 15:49, 28 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]