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Secretaría de Inteligencia edit

This article is already marked as a Wikipedia:Good Article. We need to improve it in checking that all the sources are there, that the layout of the page is simple and efficient, the images relevant, and the wording precise and elegant. Such a great article should become an A-Class or an Featured Article --San Marcos 19:26, 20 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This is a marvelous article, but it still needs a good deal of improvement before it can become a FA.

There are a number of sections containing lists. (i.e. Objectives, Subjects of Interest, Structure) These sections should be in prose, additionally, you may consider explaining some of the items.
The article is littered with short and one-sentence paragraphs, these should be merged or added to.
The "See Also" section should be merged into the article unless the items are already linked.

*Exeunt* Ganymead | Dialogue? 15:59, 18 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]