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I've listed this article for peer review because after over 2 years, WT:VG has gotten all the mainline Sakura Wars games up to GA, with the exception of the 2019 Sakura Wars, which will be released worldwide this April. To nominate the games as a good topic and eventually, a featured topic, we should get this article peer reviewed to make sure there are no problems. ProtoDrake and I have been working on the articles quite a bit these past few months. We're looking for any improvements that can be made before the game's international release and the changes associated with it.

Thanks, Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 02:54, 21 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

There's very little in the way of reception here. Since this game is coming out worldwide in about a month, I'd wait until review sites cover this game extensively before trying to nominate this for a GAN. Namcokid 47 ^(Contribs) 17:10, 9 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Got it. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 08:20, 11 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Now that the game's released worldwide, the peer review is ready. «I'm Aya Syameimaru!I文々。新聞Iuserbako» 21:23, 29 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I guess you could make the text more consistent with what's happening in the references, like make it more truthful with citation integrity. You can improve the prose so that it's more comfortable to read. Good luck and have fun! I«ias!|,,.|usbk»I 10:30, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is just some comments, as I have history and I've just put up my own peer review for another game. As to general comments; the lead needs trimming, the Reception needs expanding into a full section, and the anime should have its own article if possible since as it stands the article looks bloated and wikia-ish. Also, a gameplay image for the battle system as well as LIPS would be useful. I used it in the other Sakura Wars articles I worked on previously, and they seriously helped demonstrate the cross-genre elements. --ProtoDrake (talk) 15:26, 30 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]