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I've listed this article for peer review because I have recently made large additions to this article, mostly relating to it's history in sugar mills and plantations. Due to the small amount of people involved in this topic, I was unable to get an impartial review from WikiProject Antigua and Barbuda, or WikiProject Caribbean.

Thanks, CROIX (talk) 20:07, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720 edit

Comments after a quick skim:

The lede is quite short. I suggest expanding upon it to include all major parts of the article.
The prose of the History section is very disorganised, promotional in nature, and too long. I suggest reading featured articles on similar topics like Hamilton, Ontario or Weymouth, Dorset to see how geography articles can be written in Wikivoice
Ensure that there is a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum (currently no citations in the Education and Geography sections)

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:39, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]