Wikipedia:Peer review/Sail training/archive1

Sail training

I've greatly expanded this article from it's humble origins while trying to incorporate as much of the previous information as possible. As someone who is active in sail training, it is a personal project of mine to foster greater awareness of sail training and would like to eventually put it up for FAC. Any advice or criticism would be appreciated. -Seasee 21:31, 26 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Just from a cursory read, the article could benefit from a bit of NPoV - it currently suggests that sail training is good and great. While it may be, it's just a little bit unencyclopaedic to imply so (but nothing to put {{npov}} up about. Some of your external links should be in seperate sections, or better yet, made into lists (of each team et cetera) in seperate pages and linked to from here. Other than those minor things, great article. Falcon 04:43, Jun 27, 2005 (UTC)

Have removed excess links and placed them in a secondary article. also re-edited for balance. thanks. Seasee 30 June 2005 21:40 (UTC)