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Royal Canadian Air Cadets edit

I've been working on this article for few months now with a couple of other main contributors. There are a few items on the to-do list, but I thought it would be a good time to get feedback about the article. Any comments would be appreciated... content, style, layout, whatever. Thanks! Sancho McCann 04:16, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The introduction should include: When was the program founded? Why was it founded? How many people are in it? Who was responsible for founding it? Maybe also how it is funded and what the budget is? Kaisershatner 15:13, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Kaisershatner. I've updated the lead section with some of the information you suggested. I couldn't find specific names of who was responsible for founding it, only the organizations that partnered. Ultimately, it would have be the Queen that was responsible, but that's not so informative. Were you looking for more information than "sponsorship is split between the Air Cadet League of Canada and the Department of National Defence" when you ased "how is it funded?" I couldn't find any specific information about the budget.Sancho McCann 19:26, 3 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 23:05, 5 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've improved this article based on the suggestions from Kaisershatner and some from the automated review. If anyone would like to take a look again, that would be appreciated. Sancho McCann 04:22, 7 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]