Wikipedia:Peer review/Ray of Light/archive1
Ray of Light edit
I have recently added to and expanded the article about this excellent Madonna album. I'm looking for any suggestions on how to improve the article, as I hope to nominate it for good article status in the near future. -- Underneath-it-All 02:17, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
- Dates should use either 0 or 2 commas, depending upon the subject of the article; American-related articles should use 2 commas, while British-related articles generally used 0 commas. For example, for two commas: In January 15, 2006, this and that happened, while for zero commas, use: In January 15 2006 this and that happened.
- After a year, for consistency, a comma should either be used throughout the entire article or not used at all.
- Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.
- Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006, but do not link January 2006.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- with many critics complimenting the album's blend of pop and electronic music
- is/are weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations.
- Numbers like those under "Cerifications and sales" should have citations.
- This article can use copyediting to ensure that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. For example,
- generally positive; with many critics complimenting - semicolon should be replaced with comma
- "had a "Take a Bow"- the inside "s should be changed to 's.
- Los Angeles, California in 1997 comma missing after California
- and perhaps other copyediting fixes for grammar/spelling are needed.
- I can't seem to find the quote covered by the first footnote in the reference provided.
- Thanks, AndyZ t 23:27, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks! I went through and have adressed many of the issues. I will go through the article again to look for other spelling and grammer errors, as well as weasel words. -- Underneath-it-All 02:52, 25 May 2006 (UTC)