Wikipedia:Peer review/Ralph Bakshi/archive1

Ralph Bakshi edit

A lot of work has been put into this article overtime. I'd like to know how well the various editors who worked on this article have done, and what more could be done to bring this entry to featured article quality. (Ibaranoff24 01:47, 27 October 2006 (UTC))[reply]

I found one hyperlink in the article. I also found a weasel word in Critisism, and please get a comparison image of one of Peter Jackson's influences. Wiki-newbie 14:05, 27 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • Yeah, sorry about that. I would have converted that to a reference note, but I found that the link was broken (see the article's talk page). Still trying to find a replacement source for that. Also, what exactly was the "weasel word"? Please specify these things. (Ibaranoff24 16:04, 27 October 2006 (UTC))[reply]

"Wrongly racist" - Try not to have too much of a POV. Wiki-newbie 16:51, 27 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]