Wikipedia:Peer review/Pornography in the United States/archive1
Pornography in the United States edit
The GA underwent a new part of edits. Feel free to indicate what should be done generally and added further. Thanks. --Brand спойт 07:21, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
- Do a grammar check. First sentence in the lead has subject/verb disagreement for example ("A and B has not existed..."). -Amatulic 22:56, 31 October 2006 (UTC)