Wikipedia:Peer review/Police Camera Action!/archive1

Police Camera Action! edit

The article has potential to become a featured article on the Main Page, but needs more work done and some video stills. A good article, with potential for expansion. --Sunfazer | Talk 12:38, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Trivia should generally be removed, as objections often appear for such sections. Besides, it is list-weighty and should be converted to prose. As of now, the article consists of a lead and a few incomplete lists- you'll need more prose than that to ensure that it is both "brilliant" and "comprehensive" (see WP:WIAFA). Thanks, AndyZ _t 22:35, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]