Wikipedia:Peer review/Philippine Tarsier Foundation/archive1

Philippine Tarsier Foundation edit

Please provide additional guidance on what else needs to be cleaned up? What's broken, incorrect, needs fixing, etc?--Guest818 01:59, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The references go right after a full stop with no spaces. M3tal H3ad 05:00, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 21:54, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
My immediate (and unfortunately very short for now) suggestion is to recast most of the bullet points into coherent prose. Much of the current article looks like a list or a pamphlet rather than a continuous article. As a reader, it's much easier to read a flowing narrative than to keep getting to new bullets and numbered lists. Good luck!--Will.i.am 09:35, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]