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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like to see what else should be done to it, and what more or less should be added

Thanks, Gamloverks (talk) 19:31, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Milk's Favorite Cookie (talk · contribs)

As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ^th.
Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text.
If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
If you were aiming for a good article, I would suggest using {{citeweb}}, {{citenews}}, etc. on the references.
The whole 2006-07 section is uncited. Add some references and/or citations.
Add a caption to the image in the infobox.
On the second image, in the caption, link "Grizzlies" (for example) to help those unfamiliar with the subject.
On the career statistics, consider adding something like this.
Other than that looks good. « Milk's Favorite Cookie ^{( talk / contribs)} 01:41, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking a look! There are some different people along with me who are working on this article, albeit some don't say what they change. I'll try to work on the things above in the article. Gamloverks (talk) 14:46, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Dates have been fixed. Measurements have been spelled out. Linked both teams in the caption. I will work on the Person data. 2006-07 section is indeed cited. I'll work on the references for using citeweb and citenews. I'll continue to add more information as I see it, but otherwise, I still have some work to do on it. I'm also getting busy with graduation, so I've had little to no time at all. Gamloverks (talk) 14:47, 16 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Added persondata, I've also merged topics because of too minimal content. Well, it's looking pretty good. Gamloverks (talk) 19:09, 16 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]