Wikipedia:Peer review/Palmyra Atoll/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I think this article could be improved to meet GA standards.

Thanks, 141Pr -\contribs/- 06:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • There is a lot of text that is uncited, such as the entire "Geography" section, the paragraph in "Climate" and the "Economy" section. There should be a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum.
  • Avoid one-sentence paragraphs, such as at the end of "Conservation and restoration"
  • Can the source listed in "Further reading" be used in the article as an inline citation?

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:37, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]