Wikipedia:Peer review/O-Bahn Busway/archive1

O-Bahn Busway edit

The article is about the O-Bahn Busway in Adelaide, South Australia. It is the longest, fastest and most heavily patronised guided busway in the world. I am looking for any feedback / comments in relation to this article before I nominate it for featured status. Will reply to any comment made and address any reasonable feedback. Feel free to actively copyedit the article if you wish.

Thank you to anyone that takes the time to offer feedback. michael ^talk 07:06, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I read through it and did a quick grammar check. A couple of parts I find hard to comment on because of the obviously Australian English. For example, figures like 80c aren't used in legal documents, $0.80 is preferred. Maybe that's an Australian thing though.

You list a lot of references, but they are all linked from the end of paragraphs. I'm not sure if this is because you are referencing the entire paragraph (often thrice) or because the info you want to reference is included in the paragraph. If the latter, you should reference the immediate fact, and this would help to unclutter all your references.

Other than that, there's just one weird thing; you have a really long caption and even another reference inside an image frame. I'm not sure if that was intentional but it looks very strange. freshofftheufo ΓΛĿЌ 09:10, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.

Per WP:MOSNUM, at Units of measurement, numbers with SI units of measure should have conversions in US customary units and vice versa. These conversions should keep to similar values of precision. For example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth". Note that the converted unit of measure uses a standard abbreviation, while the source unit is spelled out in the text.

Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a no-break space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.

Per WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.

Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{Cite web}} and {{Cite book}} may be useful here. (authors, dates of last update, ISBN #s if applicable, etc.)
Otherwise, great job! Thanks, AndyZ _t 20:10, 25 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed the applicable issues - anything else? michael ^talk 06:29, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]