Wikipedia:Peer review/November (film)/archive1

November (film) edit

I'm having a little trouble on this article (a case of "Editor's Block", if you will). I've collected all the references for it, and am trying to expand it, but I'm not making a great deal of progress. Please advise. Thank you! Extraordinary Machine 22:54, 18 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Very good article lots of sources, wikilinks, and it is well put together. There are a few issues that need to be addressed in my eyes. Such as the plot details section all it says is; In the words of Cox, her character "goes through three phases. First there's denial. Then she feels guilty and sad about the situation. Then she has to learn to accept it." Now I'm all for the plot summary being short and sweet, but this does not reveal anything about the plot at all. The Development section is quite long I think this article's section would benifit with the removal of Cox's development into the a "serious actress" for it does not concern the movie's development. Again I would like to tell you the article is very good, I like it very much and I can tell how hard you worked on it from the page's history, and I would love to read more about the plot.

KnowledgeOfSelf 02:47, 20 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments! I will endeavour to address your concerns as best I can. Once again, thanks! Extraordinary Machine 20:58, 25 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I'm about to nominated this at WP:FAC (see Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/November (film)), so I'm archiving this request. Extraordinary Machine 04:02, 27 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]