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National Jewish Health

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I've listed this article for peer review because…we received this notice: This article reads like a press release or a news article or is largely based on routine coverage or sensationalism. Please expand this article with properly sourced content to meet Wikipedia's quality standards, event notability guideline, or encyclopedic content policy. (June 2018).

Since then, we have updated the page and added additional links and references so we would like this page reviewed and see if further changes or edits are required.

Thanks, Samanthalreeves (talk) 18:12, 10 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Lord Bolingbroke

Based on the "we" in your message, I take it you work for or are in some way affiliated with National Jewish Health. If this is the case, that means you have a conflict of interest (COI). Wikipedia guidelines strongly discourage people from editing articles on subjects where they have a conflict of interest. Those with a COI are expected to discuss the changes they want to do to an article on its talk page or other forums and let impartial editors implement them rather than editing the article directly. They are also expected to be transparent about what exactly their connection to the article subject is. A guide summarizing the issues surrounding COI can be found here. Before the review proceeds, could you clarify whether you are affiliated with National Jewish Health in any way? Lord Bolingbroke (talk) 06:53, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]