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I've listed this article for peer review because it is too short at the moment to become a FL, but I would still like to improve it as much as possible.

Thanks, Scorpion⁰⁴²² 00:33, 14 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

~~In the infobox, "1997-98 NHL season" needs an en dash.~~
~~Per WP:COLORS, use symbols with colors in keys.~~
~~"The winner is given a grant of $25,000 to further causes the winner supports" Specify which type of dollars, Canadian or US.~~ Dabomb87 (talk) 12:30, 17 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done, done and done. Thanks a lot for taking a look. -- Scorpion⁰⁴²² 17:44, 19 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

~~In the See also section, what is the significance of a link to the List of NHL statistical leaders in an article about an award for community service and teamwork?~~ Dabomb87 (talk) 18:03, 19 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not sure, some random user keeps adding links to it. Removed. -- Scorpion⁰⁴²² 18:05, 19 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]