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Munir Bashir edit

My main question about this article is, well is it long enough? Do you think it has enough information, or does it make you feel like you wanted to read more in the end? Any ways of improving the article? An overall review of this article would be greatly appreciated. Chaldean 18:59, 15 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I have not read it in detail, but one thing is for sure: the article needs inline citations per WP:CITE and WP:FOOTNOTES, if you intend to go for GAC or FAC.--Yannismarou 21:26, 15 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 22:56, 15 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]