I have been working on this article for simply ages, and would like some feedback, criticism, and general comments. Ideas for improvement? --Firsfron 22:09, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
The lead needs to be expanded per WP:LEAD, the refernces need to be converted to footnotes, see WP:FOOTNOTE and it needs a Demographics section to start and much expansion. --Jaranda wat's sup 00:10, 4 March 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the several suggestions. However, the demographics section can't be added: it's an unincorporated community. Thus no official figures. As for expanding, what can I even expand it with?--Firsfron 01:03, 4 March 2006 (UTC)